lidlurch's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[other Times]

have you ever thought that your have cool music?xD

i really liked this song. the drums fit really well with alot of the electronic synths and i like the bell part especially. it gets a bit repetative starting around 1:00, but that's my only complaint

suggestions: add some sort of piano part to this song. it would sound really good mixed with some acoustic stuff, so i would suggest you do that. also, even if it is a loop, i would suggest making a bit longer so that you can make the ending much better

btw, could you check some of my stuff out? maybe the less reviewed would be nice :D thanks

-Blue Iris

[Windwinged Butterflys]

this is sick

i rarely give out tens, but this song definitely deserves it. you've got a really nice touch of that asian style to it and the piano works really well with it too. i really like how you incorporated a lot of the acoustic stuff with electronic stuff as well. that's what i like to do. as a suggestion, i would make a version that was plainly acoustic without drums and alot of orchestration you know? i think that'd be awesome. two thumbs up from me ;) i wish i was this good ;)

btw, could you check out some of my stuff? try to get the less reviewed stuff ;) thanks!

-Blue Iris

Druids-Warcry responds:

i will be sending out a more orchestrated mix of this song, im glad im opreved for your ten! glad you like man! keep up and keep me posted on your music

[{B.A.B.} Obsidian Horror]

oh crap dude

this is friggin awesome! i can totally see this for a fantasy war game like WOW or some rts game like lotr haha. i love it though, everything goes together really well. i'm a total band geek, so i usually have alot of criticisms for music like this, but this piece really works together well. the only things i would suggest would be to make a longer arrangement and add maybe some solos to it :) other than that, it's awesome! what program did you use?

btw, i share your hobby of making music, could you check mine out? thanks :)

blackattackbitch responds:

I wish I had time to check out your tracks, but right now I'm busy as hell....

Glad I managed to escape tougher criticism lol, but I don't mind criticism at all, please give me your best shots hahaha

I wanted to make this longer, but my system started collapsing as I was making this song, so I had to wrap this up and shut it down.

Btw, I use FL Studio. All of the instruments I use are listed on my userpage.

[UnfinishedSong]

use a wider range of guitars bro

i think that you need not only a heavier sound on the background guitar, but to add more to the part where the melodic harmonies come in, u know? i would also add drums and a bass. try to get a better quality jack as well ;)

btw, could yo u check some of my stuff out? it would be greatly appreciated. (not forming anesthetic please lol) thx :D

JoHobo2 responds:

I'll make sure 2 do that when i edit/rerecord this part of the song :)

[Earth, Sky, and Sea]

sheesh this is awesome

i absolutely love it! me and my friend make music just like this! it reminds me of a mix of mute math and pink floyd, which is very interesting! the only complaints i've got are the sudden stops that happen throughout the song. i feel like this is a flowing song, so it needs to flow and not cut off anywhere on guitar or anything u know? other than that it sounds pretty sick, and it's more ambient than anything else in my opinion. great job :)

btw, could you check my stuff out? it's not like this, but i try to mix acoustic stuff with electronic stuff. could you review it for me? it'd be appreciated :D

Micahman5000 responds:

I love pink floyd! Also thank you for pointing that out the sudden stops- I'm working on making better transitions with my song writing and have been trying to get things a bit more sewn together. Also thank you, it is a bit more ambient, but i have absolutely no idea how to put my music into a genre (even with the music I listen to), if there were an alternative genre setting then i would use that on pretty much everything haha. Thanks for the review man, it's always great to get some feedback and I greatly appreciate it :P

[SML2 - The Star Maze (Remix)]

interesting

i definitely think it sounds cool, but it gets repetative at the beggining, so if there is any way that you could change up the synths it would sound better. and i agree with daveguy, it's a little high pitched (which is the style, i understand, but give it a rest ever once in a while u know?) other than that, it sounds pretty cool

btw, lol, could you check my stuff out too? i need criticism for my editing process lol i've got enough on forming anesthetic so anything else would be nice :D

[UnnamedRiff1]

needs to be longer

it sounds like something strait out of red hot chili peppers, so if you're going to do a song like this, it's gotta be amazing. also, i would recommend making it longer so that it's not so hard to work with, u know? but that's just me. it's harder for me to work with something that's so short. other than that, i love this riff. you could do alot with it!

btw, could you check some of my stuff out for me? that would be greatly appreciated! (not forming anesthetic) thanks :D

JoHobo2 responds:

Thanks 4 the review :). I'l check out some your stuff in a second and leave you a review :D

[Slayer waves chiptunish]

this is sick

i love how you combined both acoustic and electronic (stuff i love to do) and you also put in the style of a side scrolling guitar. this is origionality at it's best! 10/10 bro :D

btw, could you review a song or two for me? and not forming anesthetic, i've got enough advice on that one ;) thx :D

Fantomenk responds:

thank you... ill make sure to listen to your tracks and tell you what i think mate :D

[You better run]

interesting!

this is pretty neat and i love the whole mixing ideal to it. the part at 0:40 came as a shock to me lol. i really felt like it was going to be more of an 8 bit song. i really think you should make an 8 bit version of this song. other than that, it sounds pretty sick. i'd try to use more guitar than synth at the main impact though. it'd fit the drums better. awesome!

btw, could you check out some of my stuff? thanks :)