mysterious and alien
it was very well put together, though the loop itself could be a bit more complex so that it isn't like a loop that's looped over and over. for me i think you should add a bit more to it than what you have. it could be just 16 seconds, and i feel like you could do a bit more with it
This is actually a demo version, seeing how it has a high score, I will probably recreate it with sixteen note fills, and it wont be a loop.
once again, needs refining xD
definitely one of your better songs, yet like the rest it gets kind of repetative and iffy with the rubbing at points. i'm digging your style though, so it may just be your style that i'm getting used to. which program do you use? do you do it all with keyboard? once again i really like the drums. pretty good bro, just work on it a bit ;)
FL Studio, man. I program it all on 'Piano Roll' which is kind of like Garage band, just a lot easier to manage. So I don't actually play on a midi piano, I just program the notes to hit at specific times.
I'll try to get them less loopy, and I'll add more solos and stuff in my newer projects.
hm...good ideas, bad mixing :P
what really annoys me most about this song is the background synth (the really flowing one that isn't so acidy...it just doesn't go with the rest of it) i see alot that you could do with this song. if i were you, i'd change that synth to something else, and not just take it out. i dig the drum beat alot! it's awesome and never gets boring. the rubs on the solo synth sound iffy, i mean, it adds to origionality and the style of the song, but it just didn't do it for me :P overall it sounds alright, but definitly needs to be touched up. good job though
Yeah, thanks man, next time the only thing not acid will probably be a rhythmatic guitar. I'm planning on an Acid Boy 2. PM me any tips, man, and don't forget to point out the synth you don't like in time measurements if you do.
WOW
all i can say is wow to this one. i love it!! the emotion really follows through, and somehow the most unlikely instruments in this one fit together. the synths contrast, yet you make them fit. it's amazing in my opinion. and to use fl studio...lol, i can't figure out much from that thing. great job!
awesome
because it's a normal techno song, i've gotta be a little harsh on you ;) i really think the melodies and everything that goes with it are very well done. i could see this being played at a rave! maybe make it a bit more lively with a bigger drumbeat and more kick. although it does have a sick refrain! and idk what danimart2005 is smoking... lol
what to do next eh?
lots of potential!! i know exactly what i'd do with this song, but idk if you'd like it :P deffinetly go into a more cymbal/crash mode with the beat and change the forms in the synths up a bit. add a refrain and a bridge, and just build off of it. send me your next form! loved it!
could you check some of my stuff out? i really need reviewing!! thx xD
Thanks for the tips! I feel really in this project now. Yeah, I'll check your tunes. And I'll be sure to send you the next form.
i'm diggin this
i love the mixing. usually this kind of buzz on the synth gets annoying, but with this kind of song it really doesnt! it all works out with eachother. the only constructive stuff i've got for you is to try to make it a bit longer and with more form. i love the mixing style, but try to organize it so that you can make a longer version, u kno?
could you look at some of my stuff? it'd be greatly appreciated if you'd review ;)
meh.......
lots of room for improvement, i think. lower the bass a bit and organize the drumming a bit more. i really like the idea of being simple, but this is a bit too simple for me, i mean...three instruments on a song like this? cmon dude, gimme some counter melodies or something! you got great potential on this song bro. almost reminded me of donkeykong ;)
could you review my stuff for me? it'd be greatly appreciated ;)
Thx for the review. Im going to put some more work in to this song and we'll see were it leads :'>
hmm...
happy hardcore it is ;) i love the progression you have put into this song. it's definetly at the top of my list for best electronica 0_0 the only nags i have about it is how repetative it gets :P i'm a real stickler when it comes to repetative stuff, but i suppose most electronica stuff is. other than that, i loved it! u use fl?
could you check my stuff out too? i need reviews, BAD lol. i'm editing like all of my music
Yes, I do use FL studio. And I'll check out your stuff, and give you the best advice that I can! :)
perfect for that scene
I really like the peaceful happiness that this song brings to mind. it really reminds me of when my mind would wander off in elementary school. love it! very charming
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