lidlurch's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Acid Boy]

hm...good ideas, bad mixing :P

what really annoys me most about this song is the background synth (the really flowing one that isn't so acidy...it just doesn't go with the rest of it) i see alot that you could do with this song. if i were you, i'd change that synth to something else, and not just take it out. i dig the drum beat alot! it's awesome and never gets boring. the rubs on the solo synth sound iffy, i mean, it adds to origionality and the style of the song, but it just didn't do it for me :P overall it sounds alright, but definitly needs to be touched up. good job though

SourPuddle responds:

Yeah, thanks man, next time the only thing not acid will probably be a rhythmatic guitar. I'm planning on an Acid Boy 2. PM me any tips, man, and don't forget to point out the synth you don't like in time measurements if you do.

[Future trance song loop]

what to do next eh?

lots of potential!! i know exactly what i'd do with this song, but idk if you'd like it :P deffinetly go into a more cymbal/crash mode with the beat and change the forms in the synths up a bit. add a refrain and a bridge, and just build off of it. send me your next form! loved it!

could you check some of my stuff out? i really need reviewing!! thx xD

Dr-Slump responds:

Thanks for the tips! I feel really in this project now. Yeah, I'll check your tunes. And I'll be sure to send you the next form.

[300Mbps]

meh.......

lots of room for improvement, i think. lower the bass a bit and organize the drumming a bit more. i really like the idea of being simple, but this is a bit too simple for me, i mean...three instruments on a song like this? cmon dude, gimme some counter melodies or something! you got great potential on this song bro. almost reminded me of donkeykong ;)

could you review my stuff for me? it'd be greatly appreciated ;)

8bitRush responds:

Thx for the review. Im going to put some more work in to this song and we'll see were it leads :'>

[Not More Happy Hardcore!]

hmm...

happy hardcore it is ;) i love the progression you have put into this song. it's definetly at the top of my list for best electronica 0_0 the only nags i have about it is how repetative it gets :P i'm a real stickler when it comes to repetative stuff, but i suppose most electronica stuff is. other than that, i loved it! u use fl?

could you check my stuff out too? i need reviews, BAD lol. i'm editing like all of my music

Absolix responds:

Yes, I do use FL studio. And I'll check out your stuff, and give you the best advice that I can! :)

[Adventure Road 2]

eh... - _-

too repetative for me, but for a jokey get stuck in your head song, i would give this a nice score ;) if you like this kind of music, check out my song summerfield xD it's sure to give you a laugh and a headache ;)

SourPuddle responds:

Yeah, this song gives me a headache too. But I changed it slightly so it may be less annoying. I will check out your song, and I'll review, man. Thanks.

[Symphony No. 1 Project]

hmm....very cool

i could see this playing around christmas time, or some other cheerful time of year. i love the timpani and the strings, though if you could, include some brass! and lengthen the song for sure! and please...for the love of all that's lovely in the world, come up with a better name than symphony no. 1 project xD

check my stuff out pleze! i need feedback, doesn't matter which song! thx xD

DavidBrendel responds:

Brass will be added. Thank you for your input, and I will check some of your stuff right now!

[Ye Old Radio Program]

hmm....good, however

the radio things get really annoying, but i see how you were trying to capture the feel of an old radio. you deffinetly did that, however, i would suggest working more on focusing on the music, and not the radio stuff. make the voices into the background more, and build them up at the climaxes. other than that, it was definitely interesting

FrewtyLewps responds:

Thanks for the constructive criticism! Haha, the thing about this song is I completed it all in one shot and didn't take a step back from it really. Guess that was my mistake in that the music kinda got put more into the background than the radio program did.
Edit: Oh yeah, you can notice exactly when I started drinking while making this song. Right when that disco-ish beat kicks in.

[Corneria Remix]

awesome, reminds me of supersmash bros

i love the synths and the lead one you put in here. sorry, i couldn't name it even if i tried, but this is awesome video game music!! allbeit a remix, i can't help but think that you're amazing at just "experimenting" lol.

i make music too, would you mind checking my stuff out? thx

KillForChaos responds:

Well since you were nice enough to review I will tell you the lead synth i used.
Sytrus - Electric 3
^ in the guitar section

It sounds nothing like a guitar (its my favorite sytrus synth)
and I will check out your tunes as well : }

P.s. Check out my Wario Rapes Sonic song too!

[Song Preview]

soooooo epic

i rarely ever give out tens, but this preview really does it for me. the mix of acoustic and electronic is the kind of stuff i like to do, and this is just perfect. i can almost see someone turning to the darkside to this in some movie xD keep working on this song, it's got alot of potential!

could you check my stuff out too? i like to pretend i'm a good artist, but i still need reviews ;) thanks

FrewtyLewps responds:

Wow, thank you very much! I'll check your stuff out definitely for getting such a humbling review. I appreciate it!

[Waves of grace]

hmm...

i love the trance twist you put to into a hip hop sounding synth that you had at the beggining. i've never heard the origional song, so i can't say much about the changes, but i think it's pretty cool. i could see this played at a club.

could you check my stuff out too? i've got alot of stuff, though my recent stuff is much better xD thanks

perro-electric responds:

Hey, thanks for the feedback. You can find the original track on http://www.myspace.com/jensomeonemusi c